A first animation! (Kernon at work)

I just finished test rendering the first animation! 900 frames of Kernon at work! After i rendered it i did notice some mistakes, and will fix those.

http://www.dm-photographie.com/filecellar/WorkAnim_WIPy.zip
Tell me what you think!

Like it, only watched it once so this is "first impressions"

Too long, i felt that it could be a bit shorter up to the bit where he looks at the laptop, although not by much.

Really liked the animation of him moving to the laptop and back.


EDIT:
After watching again, first 10 secs is ok, next 10 secs seemed a lot longer for some reason

I think if you do these tests, it may be an idea to say what mistakes you noticed just in case someone notices something they will know if you spotted it or not.

Over all its looking really good to me.

Well, the length is sort of introductory. I might be a bit on the long side, but not too much I think. This is the first shot in the movie and i have a feeling it should be close to what it is now. But that might just be me. A few things that i find wrong with it:

*When he glances to check his Laptop screen, he goes quite slow when compared to a normal glance.
*His upperbody/back is solidly frozen while he is typing. Usually when i type, (at least ) my shoulders move a bit.
*The chair sort of jerks in rotation right when he looks at his LT. stupid mistake...
*When he sits back after the final type, he slouches a bit too much IMHO.
*Also, stupid mistake with some mesh in the DR's head...

O Btw, (I did this to Myrmedon already and fairly drove him up the wall) You'd never guess what Kernon is actualy typing, Guess! He really does type something, it's "Kernon is Awesome".

I think the glance could be done faster which has already been stated. Otherwise the pace is quite good, he looks like he is working in a deliberate, relaxed way. This is fantastic!

Myrmedon

is K's left foot hovering over the ground when its pushing? looks like it is when it snaps back after returning to the desktop.

Myrm

Nope, flat on the floor. But his right foot remains resting on th leg of the chair during the entire scene.
BTW, Thanks for all the good comments everyone!

looks great to me.

Right, after thinking on this for a while, I reckon I was wrong about the length