Important, Finalizing the story

radialronnie Wed Feb 18, 2009 10:07 am

We had the rough out of the story from the beginning, but here is the semi final draft of the story:

Newbie is stumbling around in a very dark room, falling over his half finished creations. He stumbles around for a few

minutes, hurting himself at every turn.
In a room adjacent, sits Kernon, bent over some work on his desk. He hears the banging and groaning and looks up, listening

attentively. After a a little bit of time passes (think ~10 seconds), he gets of to see what's going on. He walks to the next room and

opens the door and peeks in.

As he opens the door, lights streams in and illuminates the room, temporarily blinding the newie. Kernon sees the banged-up newbie and

gently props him up under his arm and leads him into his office. He gives a him drink, bandages a wound on his arm. Then he leads him

down the hallway and and out a door. on the other side of the door is very rough scenery (extremly rough terrain, canyons, mountains,

etc). and he points out the way and gives him a map (screenshot of the Blender newbies forum). and sends him on his

way.

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The story will have more detail than that, but once we write the main story in stone, I'll start drawing up more details and camera

movements, cuts, shots, effects, etc.

Please vote, is the story done? or if not, then what else should be in it.

also, we can probably start talking a bit about the technicalities such as the shots. Post ideas about shots you would like to see in the moovy.

(ie, I'd like to see a cam movement where the cam slowly flies from the door (you don't see the door tho) to K's desk, showing a desktop nametag thingy on his desk and then slowly tilts up to see his face, and him punching away at one of the keyboards.)

Important, Finalizing the story

Is the story complete?

Important, Finalizing the story